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Music is my life 
Art my soul
We can't move ahead
Without a goal
Life is like a film
Find your role
Until you learn the trick
Keep climbing the pole
The world out there is a hungry snake
Ready to swallow you alive like a mole
Are you ready to fight for right
Or rather hide in your hole
Cause you are going to die anyway
Now write what you think
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25 comments:

fantacy in practicality said...

life is really tricky, but always remember, he is the one who proves to be fittest, only survives the run. practicality is always appreciated.

Laura said...

Very nice! I like the point that is being made here... I will always fight!!!

Abhisek Panda said...

Thanks Sancheeta and Laura for your views :D

Amado III said...

hi aabhisek... first lines are good... and yes we do need goals in life... which trick are we talking about? and which pole?

it doesn't matter much what others think... just keep on doing what is good...

Mitali said...

This one rhymes as well.I like it.....how you manage to do it everytime?

Abhisek Panda said...

@Amado III In this poem I used the word pole just as a symbol.What it symbolises is any work which seems huge....until you get to learn the trick of what you are doing keep doing it.I guess you got it now...and before you ask what is hole it's again a symbol representing home or house :D

Abhisek Panda said...

@Mitali Thanks Dear...I just try to rhyme each of my poems.I just like it that way. :D

JIM said...

Abhisek I really enjoyed this one..I liked the rhythm very much. I started following you after reading this.


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Ang said...

Dat's why I watch Survivors TV Series... I don't wish to get swallowed like a mole by de hungry snake...lol Nice!

Susan Deborah said...

Please down scroll and I have scrolled.

I see that you have combined all your passions and woven the analogies for this poem: music, film, art.

Enjoyed reading through Abhi.

Joy always,
Susan

FAYErydust said...

Woa~ I like it !
I remembered someone said that Life is a cup of coffee when you said we'll all die anyway .. It's hard to elaborate more. Anyway, nice one!!

sajeevkmenon said...

Nice thoughts on having a goal in life and living life with optimism:)

Rimly said...

You have encapsulated life in this poem beautifully Abhisek. Loved it

IRFANUDDIN said...

Yes...Life is always like a film n we must do our role honestly n with full dedication...

buttt i never advocate for being tricky bcoz if we start doing tricks, we cant be honest....

Guzar Rahi Hai Zindagi Imtehaan Ke Daur Se..
Ek Khatam Hua Toh Dusra Tayaar Mila Hai...

Abhisek Panda said...

@Jim Thanks :D
@Susan Thanks :D
@Faye Thanks :D
@Rimly Thanks :D
@Irfan bhai Thanks :D

Deguide said...

beautifully crafted poetic verses, i believe you have hit the right cord on practical living......by the way how did you disable right click ?

DS said...

Simply Beautiful! You have a fantastic way with words :)

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sulekkha said...

A motivating poem and tells the readers about you in a unique way. Loved it a lot...

Abhisek Panda said...

@sajeev Sorry for not mentioning you....Thanks for stopping by and comment :D

@Deguide Thanks a lot it's a java code.You can search for it in google. :D

Abhisek Panda said...

@DS Thanks :D

@Anonymous Thanks :D

@Sulekkha Thank you so much for stopping by and leave your view :D

Hema Nimbekar said...

lovely...nice one....nice lines...keep writing...

geeta singh said...

wow great lines:)

Nivedhitha said...

Nice poem :)More than that i like the blog design.
I too have made some poems. check this .You may like it.
www.nivedhitha-quote.blogspot.com

vaisakhi said...

glad finally got time to commnt...nice thoughts...:)...life is maybe about settin a goal n runnin towards it...wid an awareness of wat is goin around...n the stoppin where necessry...enjoybl read....:)

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